R2-48 Feedback

they have 8 posts, one of which is pointless. we feel that there are enough posts at this moment in time. also nothing is missing as far as we know.

the initial idea is good and doesn't really need to be developed any more but the assumption that '(because kids like slapstick humor)' we feel is not correct 'young children understand slapstick comedy' not always? and don't adults understand to? the genre is clear which is good to see already. we feel that there is to much happening in the opening, the story is being given away. everything can be done in college. maybe make the opening more vague to keep the audience guessing.

their analysis of the real opening sequence so ok, they make good points about the music but that seems to be what they concentrated on the most.

x